Normally you will continue to refine your thesis as you revise your argument(s), so your thesis will evolve and gain definition as you obtain a better sense of where your argument is taking you.
Tip: Check your thesis: Your thesis should be limited to what can be accomplished in the specified number of pages.
Compare this original thesis (too general) with three possible revisions (more focused, each presenting a different approach to the same topic): Your thesis statement is no exception to your writing: it needs to be as clear as possible.
By being as clear as possible in your thesis statement, you will make sure that your reader understands exactly what you mean.
Don't settle for three pages of just skimming the surface.
The opposite of a focused, narrow, crisp thesis is a broad, sprawling, superficial thesis.
Search for concrete subjects and active verbs, revising as many "to be" verbs as possible.
A few suggestions below show how specific word choice sharpens and clarifies your meaning.
Check to see if you need to define your terms (”socialism," "conventional," "commercialism," "society"), and then decide on the most appropriate place to do so.
Do not assume, for example, that you have the same understanding of what “society” means as your reader.